fan fiction scrollThe Sound of Revenge Chapter 8

 Atton RandCarth OnasiExile (Female/Light Side)

I stole the Ariel Revan thing from RevanBodyguard XD But then its not really stealling… OH WELL!! Sorry I can’t put up a sad scene =( Makes me cry

The Sound of Revenge
Chapter 8
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“Carth, what’s wro….. Oh my gosh.”

Andria forgot about Aiedail and everything else. In Carth’s arms was the lifless fiqure of Ariel Revan.

“What happend?”

“I don’t know.” Carth replied to Andria in a raspy voice.

“Hey look. Theres a shop over there.” Atton said pointing across to a equitment center.

“Really Captin Obvious? If you want to go get drunk, go to a cantina, but right now, I’m trying to fiqure out if Hunter really killed Revan.”

“I mean, the owner there might have saw everything!”

Andria looked at Atton.

“You were being serious.” Andria said surprised.

Carth also looked at Atton.

“I encourage you to go and pursuade him to tell you what exactly happend here.” Carth said.

“Why don’t we have the chick go?”

“Because it was your idea, Atton!” Andria said quickly.

“Fine!”

Atton walked off to the market while Andria staied to comfort Carth.

“I’m really sorry, Carth.”

“Why are you apoligising? It wasn’t your fault.”

Andria staired at Revan.

“Does Hunter know how to use a lightsaber yet?”

“I don’t think so.”

“Looks to me that Revan was kilt by a lightsaber stab.”

“That’s helping.” Carth said scarcasticly.

“If Hunter can’t weild a lightsaber, it wasn’t Hunter.”

“Yeah, we’ll see what Atton has to say.”

*******

Atton walked into the market place.

“Even fin sir, can I intrest you in anything?”

“Actually I just wanted to ask you some questions.”

“Was it about the robbery, because it was not me?!”

“Don’t worry, its nothing much.”

“Okay, then fire away.”

“Did you happen to see anything out on that balcony?”

The seller glared at Atton.

“Listen son, I don’t know why you want to know, but I’m certenly not telling you.”

Atton pulled out 5 credit from his pocket and tossed it on the counter.

“Does that satisfy your needs?” Atton said.

“All I saw was a little boy and a woman standing up there. That’s all I saw, I swear.”

“I think you know more than your telling me.”

“That’s all I know!”

“Did you see which way the boy went?”

“It’s gonna cost you somthing.”

Atton staired at the seller then dug his hand back into his pocket and threw another 5 credit on the table.

“Your not paying much.”

“It’s the cost, now which way?”

“The boy went that way.” The seller said pointing down another long stairway.

“Thank you.”

Atton smiled and held up two candy bars he grabbed from the counter and left.

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Notes: If you don’t get Atton’s part, he was really throwing credits to the clerk to buy candyXD XD XD XD Sorry its sooo short, but sis, Atton is, and will always be a idiot. Atleast you’ll live a life with adventure and mischief in it

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4 Responses to “The Sound of Revenge Chapter 8”

  1. RevanBodyguard says:

    OMG! oh my god! MaggOnsai! can you at least let me have my fantasies once in a lifetime. the story was good, i want to know what happens next
    wow… i feel like a idiot right now… i’m just going to lie down now…

  2. MaggOnasi says:

    You will… near the last chapter I pray

  3. Darth Shiin says:

    YOU KILLED REVAN!!! WHAT THE ****!!!!!!

  4. MaggOnasi says:

    Hahaha
    You crack me up… for some reason

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