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Polo: (Finds a message in his Data Pad)
MESSAGE: *** Meet me in the Lower City Cantina. Come alone. ***
Polo: ... Hmm... I wonder who this is?
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Polo: hmmm.......Lower City.......I'll need to find a way past the Sith security to get down there..........
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Polo: Should I even bother with this message? Ah, whatever, I have nothing better to do... *Beep* Hm? (Finds that he has another message)
MESSAGE: ** You will find a Sith patrol drunk in the Cantina. Drag him off, and take his full suit armor. **
Polo: ... *Thinking* Who is this guy?? And how does he... (heads to Cantina)
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:Entering the Cantina, Polo wanders through the patrons. He notices a private room with three or four Sith soldiers gathered, all but unconscious. ................moments later, Polo exited the building as a Sith security guard.:
Polo: Now, the elevator is.............
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Polo: *Walks to elevator*
Sith Guard: Oh, hey officer! You heading down to the Lower City?
Polo: I... *ahem* Yes, an officer down there wants me to cover for a shift for him down there...
Sith Guard: Oh, alright. I'll open the doors for you... *Pushes button, thus opening the elevator door* Careful down there, and keep your blaster with reaching range. Those swoop gangs are annoying.
Polo: *Get's on elevator*
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:Polo reaches the Lower City and exits the elevator:
:A group of about half a dozen gang members were lined up, shouting at each other in various alien languages. Suddenly they started attacking each other, whipping out blasters and stun batons. Three of the gangsters fell, and the remaining thugs turned on Polo:
Vulkar Gangster: Ha, a Sith! Better you not to travel by self!!!!!!!!!!!
Polo: ?
Vulkar Gangster: Blast him!
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Polo: *Takes cover in the corner*
** Three shots are fired at Polo's position, bouncing across the Metal Linings **
Polo: *Gh!* (Polo hides behind cover)
Vulkar: *Gagaboonta shavena loma wama!* (Sith Scum, this is our grounds!)
Polo: *Summons gun up*
Vulkar: *Sith bonta rema!* (Sith, show yourself!)
Polo: I give up! I'm tossing my gun over!
Vulkar: *Jamana Shon Looba!* Ha Ha! I knew you sith were weak!
Polo: *Tosses gun*
Vulkar: *Ha Ha, Bonna Luva Vulkaurs!* (Ha Ha, Victory to Vulkars) *Reaches down to pick up Polo's blaster* (Hm...?)
** The gun shocks **
Vulkar: Whaa??
** The gun ingnites, and overheats. BOOM! The Remaining Vulkars are dead. **
Polo: Dumb Vulks...
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aww,, cool
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hehe, that works.
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do one where polo meets calo and dies. 
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lol, that would be funny.
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Polo: (Changes uniform, then walks to Cantina)
Bouncer: *Rumi whenna manna, shuvanti manana Javyahs Canteena* (Leave all your problems at the door, in Javyar's Cantina.)
Polo: Yeah, Yeah. (Walks in)
**MESSAGE RECIEVED***
Polo: Hm...
**START>INBOX>NEW_MESSAGE>OPEN**
**((Good. You made it. I was starting to wonder if you would come. Make your way to the back Private room... I'll meet you there.))**
Polo: *Walks to Private room* Hm!!!
....
...Davik...
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Polo: Davik!
Davik kang: Time to die:aims blaster at polos face:
Polo: kicks Daviks wrist:
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Polo: Haven't talked to you face to face, Davik.
Davik: You don't fear very easily- and fearlessness is a nice feature for my mean: Why don't you join my Exchange?
Polo: Your hiring me?
Davik: More like requesting your presence in my 'company'. You have excellent soldier traits, remarkable skill, and that's why you should join me.
Polo: ...
Davik: So... what's your answer?
Polo: Even if I don't join, your thug's threats will not hire me... but I'm interested. I need money... I could use it.
Davik: Good, Good! That's good to hear.
Polo: When do I start?
Davik: You can start tomarrow. Canderous is headed to the Vulkar base, and I'll assign you with him for a while.
Polo: The Mandalorian?
Davik: Who else? You can head back with one of my escorts to my estate. Spend a night there, get rested- then I'll see how much your really worth...
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polo: (whisper) ill let canderous do all the work.. hehehe..
the next day..
canderous: Davik assigned you?
polo: yes
canderous: take this vibroblade, so more vulkars are gutted faster
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This is getting pretty good.
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vulkar: eechhoobaa jjuusskaeisto(what are u doing here!)
polo: to kick ur a**
canderous: shut the f*** up polo. uh hheddirocha(were here to eliminate u)
vulkar: :lunges at polo and punches him:
polo: :grabs vibroblade and stabbs vulkar in the chest:
vulkar: :kneels:
canderous: :spits on vulkar, and throws detonator in mouth
vulkar: :explodes:
polo: look more are coming!
canderous: shut the F*** up!
polo: :attacks canderous: uh oh
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ok, scrap the majority of that post. Spartan, Hovoth asked at the beginning for no profanity. and quit with the whole attacking everyone and everything........
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hovoth, nice story so far. i don't have time to add to it right now, but good start.
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Okay, thanks. Let's Rewind a bit there, Spartan...
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** Polo comes from room, to Davik's meeting room. Here are Davik Kang andCanderous **
Davik: There's the rook now. Canderous, this is the guy I was telling you about, Krim.
Canderous: Hm.
Polo: Hello, Canderous, nice to meet you. I'm Polo Krim.
Canderous: Stop talking ... Okay then, Davik, I'll go 'persuade' the Vulkars to pay in the money sum that they owe you.
Polo: ...
Davik: Good. Calo is out doing most of my contracts, so you will most likely meet him while on the task. I'll be seeing you two later, I've got a meeting with a messager right now.
Canderous: Yeah, alright. Let's go kid.
Polo: Eh... okay.
** Canderous takes a Tram-speeder back to the Lower city. **
Canderous: Now, let's go. Those Vulkars are creepig about somewhere in this waste of space down here...
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You need some minor role characters to help keep the it going because it is starting to drag a little long in spots but over all it is pretty damn good. 
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** Canderous and Polo arrive at the Vulkar Base entrance. Two vulkars await at the entrance, with weapons drawn. **
Canderous: Drop those weapons, or I'll cut your hands off.
Vulkar Twi'Lek: Make no demands, Mandalorian, I don't fear you.
Canderous: So you don't?
Vulkar Twi'Lek: I'm a head strong warrior, I know no limits - therefore fear is not a blockade in my path.
Canderous: *Raises Repeater* Don't toss your filth of words in my ear. I'm simply here to convince you to send your money to Davik.
Polo: Do what he says, Vulk.
Vulkar Twi'Lek: *Chuckes* So Davik is hiring more under-dogs to do his bidding?
Polo: *Draws vibroblades* Threats aren't going to cut this, is it?
Vulkar Twi'Lek: Give me your best---
** In an instant, a blast of consuming power vaporizes the Twi-Lek's Arm. **
Vulkar Twi'Lek: GAAAHH! *Grabs side*
Canderous: Had enough?
Vulkar Twi'Lek: Mppphhh... *Bites lip*
** Other Vulkar is shaking by the knees. **
Polo: Your answer.
Vulkar Twi'Lek: Ehhhrrr.... Okay! *Arm bleeding*
Polo: Davik wants the money before next week.
Vulkar Twi'Lek: Okay... *Gah!* ... Let's go Baltu! (Leaves)
Canderous: Dumb Vulkars think just becase their in their 'little gang' that they think their invinsible. Heh.
Polo: Interesting persuade style... You know, there are alternatives?
Canderous: It doesn't get easier than that.
Polo: True. Now, let's go. We still have another contract to take care of.
Canderous: Your right. Next: The apartments.
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