Topic: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

this is new and i will have more to add to the story  big_smile

They have been around for countless centuries.even before hyper-space travel was discovered,20,000 years previous. protectors of peace they say they are just and fair (but that is a matter of suggestion). They could be pacifist but no jedi would do that and sometimes they die because of it. ....back to subject. Some years ago a jedi named Konah morrie (my video game character)was investagating a patroon who was accused of stealing a proprietary colony. off subject. Master Konah had a padawan named Kardamungus. They had been together for two years(not in a relationship). ...Back on subject. Though they did not know the patroon had fallen to the darkside (after being an outcast jedi). They went to talk to her, her name was Jacklyn Bell. She was strong in the force. When Kard and master Konah got to the castle, Jacklyn was waiting for them,lightsabers drawn. two black hilts, one pure white glowing brightly.The other black As vortex, Kard almost instantaneously drew his single blade made of pure gold plasma.Konah waited for what seemed to Kard like hours. Then asked "Jacklyn why have you stolen you know better". Jacklyn had been exiled from the order two years previous. She answered "well master *Kard gasped*i have seen  the light". Then she jumped at Konah. Before she even left the ground Konah had her sabers in her hand and they were activated one cyan blue the other more silver then mercury. Kard jumped to intercept Jacklyn and succeeded there blades met in mid-air. Kard was strong but Jacklyn soon had him on the ground. Just before she cut his throat Konah Jumped in. kard recovered but stayed away for sometime . Then when he saw an opening he jumped. Konah saw the action to late Kard took over the battle but was to slow and soon lay near death with a slit to the throat and his left arm gone. Konah went berserk and finally killed Jacklyn. After Konah ran to were Kard lay dieing to hear his final words they were "I love you for all ways and forever".

Last edited by Dangerous Seduction (2009-11-03 19:45:48)

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

I like it.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Thanks jester.

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Your welcome.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

i think im going to make a new one lol

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Guys what was I thinking when I wrote this?

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

You were young... xD

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Hehe, true.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

I am not sure what you were thinking at the time but it was still pretty good.  cool

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

It's just so short and..rushed.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Well you could rewrite it now. smile

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Take all the time you want and rewrite it as George said and when it is ready you can post it.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

I probably will, and redo names

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

There's nothing wrong with their names. tongue

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

She can change their names if she wants.

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I can not tell if this is spam and a bot because it fits the story so I will leave it for now.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Never mind my last post because that was a Spam Bot and I deleted his post.  cool

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

Yeah seems we have a few of those about.

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Re: star wars the return of jacklyn bell

A few nothing I have already Banned at least 100 of them this week and deleted posts and topics of another 200+ and I wish I had the power to make you a Mod so that I would have help. I sent Starr and Revan forum messages telling them of the problems with the spam bots on here but I have not heard anything back yet.

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It'll clear up eventually, and I am honoured you consider me worthy of the position.

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