15,241

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Starr: (through the Force) Ow... my head.

Bralor: (faintly) Commander!? Commander! Ordo, get your ass over here she's waking up!

Starr: (fully gains consciousness)
(tries to move)
(realizes she is tied down)

What the hell!? You two... get me out of this!

Ordo: Would love to boss... after we tell you some bad news.

Starr: It couldn't be so bad that I try to kill you two! Tren help me out of this...

(quiet)

Starr: Wait... (looks around)
Where's Tren!? And Sonya!?

Bralor: Yeah...

Starr: You ass holes didn't!?

Ordo: It was the only thing we could do boss... either that or we let them kill you and us, taking them anyway....

Bralor: Or activate the Mass-Shadow...

Starr: (begins to strain againist the chains)
Activating the damn Umbra would have been better than letting that schutta get his hands on my children!

Ordo: They are his children to...

Starr: (tries to lunge at Ordo)

Ordo: (steps back) See...
(looks over at Bralor)

How long do you think it will take for her to calm down?

Bralor: (looks at Starr) Two weeks.

Starr: You idiots! At least tell me you put a damn tracker on that ship!

Ordo: Of course, Commander... and more than one...

Bralor: In the last places they'll ever look.

15,242

(4,113 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

You're welcome Vilxan...

Sorry I was gone guys... we had this weird thing going on with the tractor and we had to chase it around a few feilds for two hours before it ran into a pole.

And then I had to walk all the way back to get help... walk all the way back to the tractor where my dad was... then help pull the tractor back to the barn... very hard day.  <_<

Starr

15,243

(4,989 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Maioribus: That&#39;s better...

Rector: Yes... much roomer.

Ardeo: (jaws is dropped) Did you-... am I-... I am-

Rector: (stern look) Don&#39;t say it.

Fortis: Please let him say&#33;
(activates canons)
Please&#33; Then I can finally kill him&#33;

Velox: Yes... they gave the ship a size upgrade in two hours. No...you&#39;re not the only one that saw the little blurry images of a few dozen Vertos Mechanics.

Ardeo: Oh, okay... so I was not the only one that saw the little, blurry mechanics.

Proprius: No...

Ardeo: (smiles) I&#39;m fine then.

Fortis: (deactivates canons)
This sucks.

Proprius: Life sucks... get used to it.

Rector: Annuo...

All: Yes, boss?

Rector: Shut-up&#33;

All: Following orders.

Rector: (appraoches the large view window) Validus... anything?

Validus: They just keep falling back to Alpha... I think somethings up.

Maioribus: (approaches the window) You aren&#39;t the only one... (sighs)

Rector: So... what&#39;s with this Knight guy Commander keeps talking about.
(Maioribus and Validus stare at Rector)

What? Is there sometihng on my face? (pauses)
(looks from Maioribus to Validus)

(everything is quiet)

Rector: Fine... I get the clue.

Validus: Good thing... (goes back to watching the fleet in front of them)

Ardeo: (whispers to Rector) Apparently... she really, really wants to kill him.

Rector: (sarcastic tone) Thanks... that really helps.

Ardeo: (smiles) You&#39;re welcome... (turns around to walk off)

Rector: (activates a long sword)
(begins to bring it down on Ardeo)
(is stopped by Fortis)

Rector: Let me kill him... no body has to know... no body.

Fortis: If I can&#39;t kill him you sure as hell can&#39;t kill him, sir.

Rector: (calms down)
(deactivates his sword)

How in hell did he get to be on a Special Operations team? How in hell&#33;?

Fortis: You should ask the same thing about Prop over there...
(motions towards Proprius with his head)
All he does is clean his weapons and talk to himself in different tone voices...

Rector: That&#39;s his A.I. (walks off)

Fortis: Oh... (pause)
What&#39;s an A.I.?

15,244

(755 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic)

Well... I&#39;m not really dead. Just lost in oblivion... oh, wait... that&#39;s not much better.

Anyway... I&#39;m still ready to continue.

Starr

15,245

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Ordo: (stands in front of Starr while the Knights leave)

Bralor: (bends down next to her trying to get her to regain consciousness)

(A Knight steps to far into Ordo&#39;s comfort zone)

Ordo: (quickly pulls a vibroblade from the sheath on his back)
(brings it down on the Knight, killing him)

(everyone stops and stares)

Ordo: If you don&#39;t keep moving ya&#39;ll all get it.
(charges up his blasters)

Bralor: (slowly takes a hand to his boot and touchs the handle of an Echani posion blade) Move.

15,246

(755 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic)

Starr: (disappears)

15,247

(4,113 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

No... just try to control the anger.

Starr

15,248

(4,989 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Maioribus: Enemy moving to 19372...  Section/Sector Alpha-2...

Validus: Move the fleet and follow them..

Maioribus: Yes...

Starr: But not too close as to give away we&#39;re still following them...

Maioribus: Yes, Commander... (turns to a large computer)

(a large crashing sound is heard it the background)

Starr: Who did that&#33;?

Ardeo: (points to Fortis) He did it&#33;

Rector: I think we need a bigger ship.

Starr: I&#39;ll second that.

15,249

(755 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic)

Starr: Good-bye Masters... (bows)

15,250

(176 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic)

My school&#39;s only 4 hours... big_smile

Starr

15,251

(4,113 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

(stern look) Prince...

Starr

Roon... Thule... Gallinore... Ord Mantell... Korriban... Just a list of some pretty decent planets.

Starr

15,253

(176 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic)

About 8 in the morning your time...

Starr

15,254

(755 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic)

Starr: Well... part of me is here... I got to say though... I won&#39;t be here for long...

15,255

(4,989 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Rector: Smart...

Aredeo: What?

Velox: They&#39;re sizing up our fleet...

Ardeo: How is that smart?

Velox: (thinks for a second) Don&#39;t really know... ask Boss.

Fortis: I can&#39;t believe it&#33; Ardeo managed to confuse somebody&#33;

Proprius: This ain&#39;t the first time...

Fortis: Oh, yeah... you&#39;re right... he confuses people all the time.

Rector: That&#39;s because he doesn&#39;t make sense when he talks...

Ardeo: Hey&#33; I-

Starr: Annuo... quiet.
Maioribus... reports?

Maioribus: Hull at 100% capacity... Ready...

Starr: Validus?

Validus: Vertos ready to serve, Commander. (activates canons)
Let them bring it&#33;

15,256

(4,113 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

I&#39;m back...

Starr

15,257

(4,113 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Hey, bb in about 30 mins.

Starr

15,258

(4,113 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

The only people I race are useally realitives since there&#39;s no way to get any street racers out here...

Starr

15,259

(4,989 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

(A Knight approaches Riker)
Knight: Sir?

Riker: (turns around) Yes?

Knight: Sir, we have a tailer.

Riker: Who?

Knight: The Unknown Fleet that was above the planet before they mysteriously disappeared...

Riker: Size?

Knight: Much bigger than ours, sir...

Riker: How much?

Knight: About seven capital ships... ten freighters... a few thousand fighters... they look a whole lot more powerful too.

Riker: Hmm...

Knight: But sir?

Riker: Yes?

Knight: I&#39;ve never seen anything like this before... I mean they&#39;re building ships while they&#39;re moving... it&#39;s like an infinite fleet... ships just keep coming.

Riker: What do you mean?

Knight: Here... (shows Riker a holographic recording)

Riker: Oh, my Force...

15,260

(4,277 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Ordo: We know everything about you... which is why we know you do have family...

Bralor: Other than them...

Ordo: We know you&#39;re the father of her children... even if the children don&#39;t know...

(over comlink a buzzing noise is heard) Ready to fire.

Bralor: We&#39;re sure we can kill you Knight... and we don&#39;t mine dying for our Commander... beause if you knew something about Mando&#39;ade tradition... you&#39;d know we&#39;d rather die in a good fight than live a good life...

Ordo: So it&#39;s your choice, Knight... we activate the Umbra and kill this whole God-forsaken planet and everything, everyone on it... which the Commander would be happier with...

Bralor: Or we let you leave... taking them with you...