ok...that made no sense at all. What the hell are youy talking about?
42 2006-04-09 16:35:49
Re: The New Jedi Order (635 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Picard watched through the computer screen as Gregory Entered the ice academy....and all the others.
"Ensign." barked Picard.
"Yes sir!" the ensign came running from the elevated level
"Tell Yojimbo that everyone is at the academy now!" with in a second the ensign ran to the elevator.
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*Aliana was fascinated by the way Yojimbo looked without the charade, the mask. She opened her mouth to say something but an officer bumped passed her and ran right up next to Yojimbo.
*All she heard was unitelligable whispers*
*yojimbo got up and ran out of the 10-Foward, ignoring her.
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On the Bridge he stopped right next to Picard. The stared intently as the computer screen lighted their faces a dull green.
"Activate the program." He said to Picard.
*Picard just looked up at him...
"Please?" he added
Picard looked back down to the monitor and pressed a small tirangular button on the panel
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They all stared at each other for a moment.
Yojimbo spoke up "ok...so now wah-zzzstt" Yojimbo started to fade in and out, as if being pulled to another plane of reality, the back again.
"All of your destinies have come entertwined with one another's." said Yojimbo.
*Roy just stared at him then moved his hand through the figure...he wasn't here.
"All of you come to seek answers from Atris, but she needs to be healed. And the holobanks here are wiped clean."
His figure turned to Tulak
"your mind and body was taken from you for ten long years, though you do not remember a thing. You came seeking a holocron created by Kreia, dealing with memory recovery. Very clever of you....you knew that when Revan defeated Malak, he remembered her and sought her out. She restored his memory and kept record of their sessions. He recollected something he had to deal with and left. Kriea went looking for the Exile in order to train him. She did, and died. You are the one with searching for a new life"
His figure turned to Sion
"You came hear, hoping to destroy whatever was left of the sith, hunting two things....Tulak......and the holocron. You are the Hunter.
His figure turned to Roy
"you have fought many men to get here...but for your friends, and answers. Why have all of us come together? the answer will come. You are the warrior."
Then turned to Gregory in the shadows. His figure moved foward to meet his part in this.
"You hunt the last all of the Jedi....seeking to destroy Visas perhaps? In any case, you have survived the battle...bent those to your will, and now seek your own goals....You are the Slaver."
"You may have guessed it but this one man has planned your fates since the begining...Set up these starnge set of coincidences, and sparked the anger of the sith. He needs warriors like all of you for the trials to come. "Revan" will need all of you for the trails to come."
All stared into the holocron....the thoughts bolcked from all....the internal struggle.
"I am aboard the U.S.S Enterprise and will remain hidden until the time is right. Your destiny....whether you choose to accept it....is to go to the outer regions and aid Revan his fight...and he will aid you. It is that simple, but you must choose."
His figure faded out.....along with the answers to all........
43 2006-04-09 16:10:18
Re: New Jedi Order Sign-up (30 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
I think I did it....we shall see if this fic goes anywhere now. It all depends on who will act upon it......
44 2006-04-08 16:42:33
Re: New Sith Apprentaces (208 replies, posted in The Dark Side)
I'm just joking. Though you do seem intent on wanting to insult me...I don't get angry over that kind of stuff.
45 2006-04-08 16:40:31
Re: Kotor3 Wishlist (118 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic III)
Then you go down the road of Free-ended gameplay and that is not becoming of KotOR. I do agree with the molre moves though, like 50 kinds of animations for attack, power, flurry, and critical strikes.
46 2006-04-08 16:34:49
Re: Leaving For Two Weeks (2 replies, posted in The Old Republic Cantina)
Godspeed Vilxan...and happy easter.
47 2006-04-08 16:33:52
Re: Game (80 replies, posted in Suggestions and Comments)
It really is. I do judo at my little "military" school.
48 2006-04-08 16:23:11
Re: The New Jedi Order (635 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Yojimbo,once he was sure that Aliana was behind him, turned to face the "Grey" Knight.
"Enterprise this is Yojimbo, two to beam up." he said to the small comm on his chest. "Destroy him." he commanded the lead ninja who was wearing red.
*Then, Aliana and Yojimbo were beamed up, their particles disapearing before everyone's eyes, then a small flash of light and they were gone.*
*The ninja clad in brimstone pulled out a sword and attacked Tulak....But his sword was met by a flash of red of his lightsaber....they were interlocked.
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*On the bridge of the enterprise two figures appeared right in front of the the comm screen*
"Welcome to have you aboard sir!" said the officer in red.
*Aliana turned slowly to make sure what she was seeing was real. She just stood there waitng for someone to break the ice.
"Oh, I'm sorry Aliana, This is the "other" captain of the ship Jean-Luc Picard.
"A pleasure to meet you." Said Picard
*Jean was bald but had good figure. His walk, like Yojimbo's, was driven by his legs rather than his arms, siginfying pride and strenght.
*Picard just stood there. Then turned back to the crew for a quick glance and then back to Aliana...Yojimbo giggled slightly to himself.*
"Uu-mmm...Have, Have I offended you in some way?" Picard asked sheepishly.
"oh, I'm sorry, just been a lot of places in two hours." she replied.
"I'm sure you have and you may need rest." Interevened Yojimbo "Officer, please escort or guest to her room." and with that a rodian dressed in yellow came and bowed poiltely.
"After you." said Aliana.
*the rodian got up from his bow and trailed off the bridge into an elevator...Aliana followed.*
*Picard walked up to Yojimbo, a grave look on his face. "Is that the one?" he asked.
"It is." replied the ninja. "And we don't have much time. I think you should try and find the "healer" immiediately."
"Understood...." he started then looked back at him with a half-humerous voice "And don't give me commands, this is my ship too."
"Haha, alright Captain." A smirk would have been seen if not for his mask.
"Alright ensign, Get us out of here, Warp 5." Picard sat on the command chair and set his hand foward." Engage!"
*The enterprise, in his orbit, turned fully around and started to accelerate. Then boomed off into space. A small flash of light as it entered warp/hyper space.
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Unfamiliar ceiling
*Aliana slowly arose from her bed. The lavishments of the room weren't exactly her taste but they did make her feel more comfortable than on Tulak's ship. She got up slowly and made her way out the hall and down the hallway. A crewman dressed in a blue uniform crossed her path*
"Hey." started Aliana "Were can I get a drink around here?"
The officer smiled and said "the place for that would be 10-Foward...watch this."
She walked over to a side panel and said "Computer, please direct Miss Aliana to 10-Foward."
"Please follow the arrows on the wall please." asked the computer in a serene voice.
"Uhmm, alright" replied Aliana.
*The enterprise was a marvelous ship. The walls were a bright white and there was carpet throughtout the whole ship. The doors made a soft swishing noise as they closed and everybody seemed cheerful and happy that they were in space. She went up two elevators, 15 hallways and finally made it to 10-Foward.*
She stood at the door for a moment...something wonderful about this ship. A small shoosh was made as she tapped to the door panel.
*10-forward was shaped like a horseshoe and small circular tables were spread apart. Many officers and crewman were relaxing, having a good time, and some were playing poker. The bustling noise heard was like that of a cantina and the bar was transparent and brightly lighted. And then she saw him....Yojimbo*
*He wore all black exept for an untied gee over the compression clothing, same tabi shoes, and baggy pants, but the most noticable feature was no mask...just his face. He seemed very clam, his eyes were a dark brown and skin was tanned brown. His lips were full, like a woman's , and could see an ungroomed mustache coming in, but not quite there yet. His hair was a jumble and was flat on top, with some hair sticking out now and then, and the tips were curled upward, carresing his head figure. It was short and black...and natural.*
Yojimbo turned his gaze from his drink to Aliana standing in the hallway.
49 2006-04-08 10:57:29
Re: New Jedi Order Sign-up (30 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Have patience Gregory, It will happen soon, and you will be tied among with us.
50 2006-04-08 10:48:30
Re: Joke Of The Day 3 (44 replies, posted in Jokes and Funny Stuff)
Chuck norris doesn't consider it s*x if the woman survives.... poor Chuck.
51 2006-04-08 10:44:31
Re: Game (80 replies, posted in Suggestions and Comments)
Tai-Chi is more of a spiritual siphon. It will help you grow mentally. I think that you would be extremely interested in Judo which means "Gentle Way" because of the fact that there a a lot of moves that can incapacitate a person without any lasting harm. And damn good fun while learning it.
52 2006-04-08 10:41:17
Re: New Jedi Order Sign-up (30 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Doesn't matter. Thx for your confidence in me, I appreciate that. By the way, this is turning out to be quite a story if I can tie my storyline to that of yours and Gregory's.....I think I might be able to do that.
53 2006-04-07 23:47:17
Re: Joke Of The Day 3 (44 replies, posted in Jokes and Funny Stuff)
When Chuck Norris bowls, he hits one pin and the other 9 faint.
54 2006-04-07 23:45:22
Re: Who Hates Math (115 replies, posted in The Dark Side)
In the regard that you start fights, initiate prejudice, and are highly offensive.
I really don't care about anything you can "say" Nihilus. You are a newb and if you had half a brain, you wouldn't try and insult your way into the inner circle.
It doesn't look good.
55 2006-04-07 23:41:12
Re: New Jedi Order Sign-up (30 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
Let them do that. The sentence long stuff makes the storyline unnofensive to anyone and they don't start fighting. It flows and has true texture.
56 2006-04-07 23:37:34
Re: The New Jedi Order (635 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
"He wants to see you..." came a voice from the darkness "Because you are a black hole in the force"
*Yojimbo appeared from the darkness, Ninjas from everywhere were appearing. Some from the pillars overhead...others from the very entrance.*
"Just like the exile."
*Aliana just stared at the face in the darkness, a molding shape that never made up its own mind what it was. Then back to the blue geed ninja. He was calm for some reason, truely calm. Why would he risk fighting this being that was of the force?*
"The reason you have any importance in this matter, is because you are a wound trying to heal itself by leeching off others. The hole sucks in energy faster than the wound can be healed..."He started, apparently getting to the point of his intrusion
*He sighed to himself as the swirl of energy flashed back and forth but kept his fortitude, unwavering from the hurricane that was undoubtadly trying to frighten him*
"Many force users have been able to find eternal life after death through the force, such as the ancient sith lords on Yavin 4. From the holocron We uncovered from the ice academy on Telos, Kreia recorded the subtleties of these wounds."
"If he could siphon the energy from your body, he can manifest himself on this plane of reality again, and......That I cannot allow. For now, he is as powerless as a drunken Bantha in the middle of the dune sea...so to speak."
"HOW DARE YOU!!!" Cried Tulak from beside Aliana.
"Quiet you!" He exchanged a glance that made Tulak recoil in his mind "You are just a pawn in this whole game and you couldn't realize it! Thinkin yourself noble because you fought for "true" power. Sith Lords never stop deceiving....even after there time is done."
*Yojimbo then turned his glance to Aliana. There was a connection, almost as if it were deja vu. They stood staring for the longest time until he broke the silence.
He outstreched his hand....it was rough and caluosed from fighting, but there was no harshness in it. Like a feather floating to the ground.
"You are faced with a choice now Aliana..." He started abrubtly "Come with me and I can find someone who can heal your wound and draw out the excess energy from your soul. Or you can let the "Knights" "draw" it from you.
I will not lie to you, If you stay, it will be easier, but the energy drawn from you will also drain from your lifeforce and kill you. There is no shame in either of these choices. But answer true to yourself..."
57 2006-04-07 08:20:16
Re: The New Jedi Order (635 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
By the way Gregory, you Fan-Fic is great becuase your not like "ALLL POWERFUL SITHLORD" that kills everybody in one post, keep up the great work!
58 2006-04-07 08:10:16
Re: The New Jedi Order (635 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
The space battle was furious now....thousands of cannons were all in a desperate atempt to stay alive while their masters on board used their bodies to their will.
*Yojimbo was watching the space battle from the ice academy on Telos. The small snowflakes whirled around him as the wind made a gust. Then closed his eyes to feel the bitterness of the cold. He was no jedi, but he could feel the importance of were he stand.*
*To black figures walked their way to him as if they had seen a ghost. Both of the ninjas were new...and untrained.*
"Yojimbo-san, The academy is definately here and still in one peice." Said the shorter of the two.
"Well.." Yojimbo paused, lost in the thought of his mind "I want you to download every single data stick from the archives.
"Hooo"
*The two ninja eagerly went off to retreive the information.*
*Now, Yojimbo turned his attention back to the space battle overhead. The flashes of green and red reminded him of Galactic night back in 10-Foward.*
He looked down and whispered to himself "Something so important...." then broke off "One is willing to destroy the planet to erase it and one is willing to risk his life to preserve it."
He heard a rustle of the snow behind him "Jinn....is it done?"
"Yes Yojimbo....all the information is here on this datapad."
"Did you check for viruses young one?"
"Yes, the virus scan picked those up and it is perfectly clean."
"Good..." He turned his head to take one last look at the battle "Spectacular though" he whispered.
"Sir?" Jinn naturally responded.
"Nothing, just.....seems a little pointless."
*Yojimbo then put the datapad in his gee and walked to the edge. The two black
figures of Kasuki and Jinn followed, and they jumped off the plateu...disappearing in the wind...*
59 2006-04-07 07:48:17
Re: The New Jedi Order (635 replies, posted in Star Wars Fan Fiction)
It's ok....just more diolougue....and less......breaks.......please.
The format is this
*=action without words exmp. *He jumped into a river of fish*
Diolougue and grammer is just like a book exmp.
"Look," he said "we don't have time for this!"
do that and it will be readable at least.
60 2006-04-07 07:44:52
Re: Best Title Knights Of The Old Republic III (104 replies, posted in Knights of the Old Republic III)
The title has to be generic and have nothing to do with the character.
See, what you guys are failing to see is that maybe Revan DIES and you go around following in his footsteps on other planets looking for him. Maybe it has nothing to do with TRUE SITH at all and is just a philoshphy instead of an actually peoples.